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Jittery Jacky by HeffyDoodle Jittery Jacky by HeffyDoodle
Part of an art trade with my bud :iconretro2d:, of her split-personality gal Jacky :D

... Things about this bug me, though. :( Particularly the right Jacky's pose. Oh well. Critique is welcomed I guess!

Jacky (c) :iconretro2d:
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KyannMaple Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
I really like the poses. Very expressive. Scary face on the red one.
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SwanLullaby Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The pose is really great!
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RaccoonyCoonkun Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Student General Artist
I don't know why, but I feel like your expressions and acting has jumped up a level - must feel good to be taking those animation classes again, doesn't it? Your human figures look so amazing! 8D

As for critique, well, these characters just look so good! But there's definitely something about the one in red's pose, like it's a little stiff. It's like you're trying to make her curve, but at the same time thought against it so it ends up looking like she's in mid leap and about to fall on her face. Maybe if you push her pose more so her line of action is a C-shape? Think Marceline from Adventure Time, who's constantly hovering but is always in that curved position (though her hair really helps to also define that, so that's maybe something to consider in the future when working with long-haired characters). Feel free to exaggerate more. Your girls will stay pretty no matter how far you push their poses and expressions, trust me on that. ;P
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SeeSamSketch Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow. The combination of your style and this design is really eye catching.
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DKVonOtto Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
I think this turned out great! xD
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Zobeez Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Student Filmographer
Oh man! I love this! :'D

You really captured her, dude! ;u;

I need to do your trade already now. grrr haha
Man, thanks! I LOVE IT.
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HeffyDoodle Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Student Filmographer
Mission accomplished! B) This was fun. :D
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Zobeez Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Student Filmographer
=D i'm glad!
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Scunosi Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think it's 'cuz she comes off more floaty than leapy. Maybe she's not properly grounded? She'd have had to have pushed off really hard to already be at such an angle while still being only like a foot off the ground. Just tilting her to the left a bit might help.
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HeffyDoodle Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Student Filmographer
Admittedly, I was sort of going for... "aimlessly floating in space" there XD; ah well. So, not sure if it's that. But if it does look off, maybe that wasn't the decision to make, haha.
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